Wow
Nice work this is pretty sweet. i love the piano work you did in this song And I like the non generic bass. Maybe a bit more variation would add to this this song some kinda drags out I think.
i also think a little bit harder kick would also help or maybe just turn it up some!
You did a wonderful job on mastering this. I feel this is at a professional level.
Awesome work!
10/10
5/5
Have A Wonderful day!
XenoxX :)
Dude, thanks for reviewing. It was (unlike many) very useful, and I will take ur advice into account when I finish :D
Nice work
to start off never use squares lol they for noobs. lol unless you know how to use them very well they just don't sound right plus there are many other sounds out there that would fit this song much better.
Nice work on the drums and bass they sound pretty good!
Nice piano too.
Overall pretty good work. make it longer with some variation!
Have A great Day!
XenoxX
yea my friend told me that squares sound like shit, i thought it was but guess not so yeah lol in the finished version i will probably take them out
Not bad
No offense but worst drum samples every lol. look into some hip-hop smaples make this beat 100x better lol
Add some more going on lol one simple melody a bass and a drum loop not enough get some effects going on and some background melodies.
Have A Great Day!
XenoxX :)
I'm going to work with it when I actually know how the song is structured... this is just the concept for the beat.
Nice work
has a happy feeling to it which i like very much
What I can say to improve is the drums not really much going for them plus you can barely here them.
Maybe add some bass. I think this will add lots to the song make it moar better!
over all nice happy melody!
8/10
4/5
Have A Great Day!
XenoxX :)
Oh...I might keep that in mind, that is, the idea of adding some bass. Yeah, I think I have a bone to pick with the drums. Their just, eh...weird.
In conclusion, I am happy this little gleam of moonlight pleased you at the least.
Thanks for the review!
-RetellaVII
Nice work
I think this is ok But For One I think you need a harder beat and second I think you need a way more powerful bass.
I think the song has a pretty good feeling to it just a bit to repetitive for me.
That one note at 2:36 is way off beat. just letting you know!
overall nice work.
8/10
4/5
H a v e A G r e a t D a y ! !
XenoxX :)
thanks for the review... that 2:36 chord you hear is a Bbmin13#11 (Bb, F, F#, e--with the ambiguity of no 3rd). the tension serves a purpose--the #11 of that chord, E (instead of Eb), is that 'off-tune' note (not 'off-beat'--as in time)--is supposed to be there to grab your attention. it's a piquant harmony sometimes used in jazz.
a harder beat and more aggressive bassline would change the character of the piece entirely; something i could possibly explore, but as of now, i think anything harder would detract from the sparse piano line that's supposed to roll in and out.
anyhow, thank you again for the decent review. :)
Humm
Its not bad.
I suggest you turn you turn up the beat some I just feel like there isn't enough going on. maybe also work on the vocals some. they sound fairly crackly
Have A Great Day!
XenoxX
i agree thank you so much for the review i will work on everthing once i get back to a place i call home right now i have a shit mic and shit pc i need to get my homie who is pro at mixin and has a bad ass mic thank you again
Nice work
Nice work in the intro caught my attention.
Now first off I have no idea what so ever for you reason of putting those random notes starting at 0:10 because they do absolutely nothing for your song.
Second I think you did awesome on the drums! except I don't really like the panning because well it fits for some songs but I think you would need to have it pan more jagged ( like instead of slowly going back and fourth just switch )
third I think it kinda get repetitive after awhile. Maybe work on some more variation to the melody!
Fourth I here some clipping which means you need to work some on your mastering. like for example that effect at :57 maybe its suppose to be like that but it sounds unnatural.
And 5th (last) Maybe work on the ending some kinda just stops.
Anyways overall pretty good job!
8/10
5/5
Have A great Day!
XenoxX :)
First off, i'd like to say thanks for the lengthy review xenoxx.
The ""Random"" notes at the beginning are supposed to be the from the countdown before the race begins. That is why I placed the audio clip right after those noises so it sounds like the motorcycles are speeding away.
Next, the panning was really an experiment with this song, because I pan the drums to one speaker as I pan the tune to the opposite speaker to try and make a cool effect.
I know the tune may get a bit repetitive, but this song comes from a high speed racing game, so I don't think a song with a tune that's all over the place would really fit as background music. I was mostly trying to stick to the original feeling so that people would easily recognize this song.
I have fixed the part at 0:57. I realized that the drum sequences did not flow together too well. Thanks for the heads up man.
And for the ending, I probably could have made a longer one, but I really just wanted the song to end suddenly like the end of a race.
Thanks for this review. It helped a lot man. I'm glad you liked it.
Nice work
Everything sounds ok except the fact that it sounds like for one all you did was dropped sounds onto a MIDI. But if not Then you should have changed up the instruments some Because I think it get boring after awhile hearing the same sound threw the whole song.
You need to really work on the sound levels because some parts of the song are really low and some very high. This makes it hard to keep the volume of my headphones on one same level threw the whole song.
I think you should work on the mastering of this some more Because I hear some crackling threw out.
Over all not a bad song maybe a bit repetitive.
7/10
5/5
Have A great Day!
XenoxX :)
Yeah i know there bad but with the soundfonts that i use it LAGS my computer up too much sooo everything starts to get complicated
Humm
I think this would sound much better with the proper compression. For one the fl slayer sounds suck but If you are going to use them you need to work on maybe making them sound more professional...
I think you did ok on the drums, Maybe work on the bass drum some.
I think some notes in the melody where off beat didn't sound right to the main chord progression
6/10
4/5
Have A Great Day!
XenoxX :)
:D Thank You. I have only been using this FL demo only a month so I will work on improving Slayer sound. I do agree thought that the melody was off. Haha just needed something to keep it going though.
Nice
But I would suggest going out and looking for some vst's. I say this because the Fl piano in particular is horrible!. so you should look into that.
Nice melody it has a cool feeling to it, a unique one for sure!
Over all awesome job!
7/10
5/5
Have A great Day!
XenoxX :)
thanks, I did get some new VST's, but my computer acted up and I lost everything!
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