Awesome job
Nice work But I do agree The intro is a bit weird But i Still give you 10/10 5/5.
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XenoxX :)
Awesome job
Nice work But I do agree The intro is a bit weird But i Still give you 10/10 5/5.
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XenoxX :)
I was tryin somethin a little different with the chord progression. I like it =)
Thanks for the review man.
Awesome
I have to say maybe work on choice of instruments but it was well played out plus this is my favorite basshunter song. I actually made a loop to this song Awhile ago you could check it out but yeah good work
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thankss alot dude ill keep the tip in mind and ill def. chek out your loop to this song
good work
Awesome job on the melody big step for you in this song sorry I would normally write a long response but I am not feeling so well so
good work keep growing strong
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its all good. thx for the review anyway.
Sweet
awesome work
Tips for final version
1: Add more variation not only to the melody but also to the instruments you use and for the melody it basically runs on the same note pattern so mabye change it around instead of just making it glitch
2: Work on the drums a lot I mean in this song the are good But like "Krazy" said before me there are parts i just wish there where more like at :23
3: At the break at :43 maybe add a cool drum line thing or some sort of break drum loop just to keep things moving it kinda feels blank
Well in the overall this is very good and the melody is very addictive and I live the bells very much they add a lot to this one more thing when changeling from bells to the synth maybe have a drum roll with a crash or something
well anyways good work can't wait to here the finale version (actually can you pm me so I can wright a long review on how I think you did lol)
So yeah again good work
9/10
5/5
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XenoxX :)
thanks a lot for your feedback! i'll take everything you said into consideration and i'll try to remember to pm you when it's done
its ok
Not bad needs a lot of work plus the back round ( the sythn that goes every 1/4) Sounds a lot like " Better Of Alone " By Alice Deejay but yeah keep working on it
I knew it sounded like something familiar, but I didn't really catch it. It wasn't intentional. What exactly needs work about it :d?
Its not bad
Some things maybe a new lead The square thing is not to Dnb Something Harder Also A More variated drum line more to it and A harder kick you can barley hear it. The melody is good just the square thing needs to be changed to somehting different. Well thats all I got
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Thanks.
Wow...
Piano is awesome In this very good very done and the choir lol awesome work I love the piano and stings it is very well put together the drum make it all the better 2 good work And thanks for the review
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XenoxX :(
Thanks, great work on yours too :)
Nice
good work lol I am in school lol but yeah My only complaint Is its a bit repetitive so maybe work on the melodies a little and dont mind my spelling I don't have spell check here lol But yeah good job your really improving.
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Wait, your in school but... the school allows you to use NG? My school banned NG and various thousands of other sites... like Myspace and so on. Its RETARTED!!!!!
And I do think I need to work on this song. At this moment im at my house, its still 7:00.
Thx for the review.
Yay!!!
Lol me hyper but anyways this is trance FTW because the kick on every quarter note. lol awesome job nice work on the drums
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XenoxX :):):)
lol.... little too hyper huh?
thx for de review
Wow Korpze
This Song Is A big Step Up for You I relly Enjoyed All the effects And stuff and the synth String...You had some variety in the song Could use a little more but not going to hold you back on that one and one more thing you need is to work on the drums a little ButBesides that very good Very good on your part And I hope to hear more like this
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XenoxX :)
thats why its a demo ;)
thx for the review xenoxx
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