Nice work
Awesome job on the Melodie and that kind of stuff.
I do have some suggestions:
First the kick in IMO just doesn't really work plus it is was overpowered makes the whole song bounce. Maybe needs some more EQ'ing just makes it seem un-professional
Second The Melodie like I said is good but the Synth you used is maybe a bit loud but not a big problem all think all you need to do is add some background music I don't think the synth itself is enough to hold the whole weight of the song to general needs some background music going on. to me it sounds to simple. Examples like a gate or Arp would probably do the trick.
Third the bass. well I think its needs some more juice, Power it up some. in English. Needs more bass, not powerful enough.
OK now the good stuff:
Like I already said the melody is sweet. Kinda Basshunterish (New word, Look it up).
the effects you used were good. like the siren fits in well.
The actual drum beats weren't bad. Good use of a kick at 1:08 sounds heartbeatish (Another new word)
And one last thing I think the song builds well. Just something to note try to Variate a little. not that I think it gets repetitive just would attract people more to want to keep listening.
So overall this was a good song and I think it has a lot of potential. Very Catchy melody. and I also like the little bit of words you threw in there to spice things up. Good work!
On another good note we both discovered two new words!
8/10
5/5
Have A Great Day!
XenoxX :)