XenoxX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Halo Theme Song]

Awesome

All I can say is get some more powerful Strings...

XenoxX

JakesFable responds:

Ok man, Thanks alot ;)

[Feral-Fox - Preview]

Man

if you don't hurry up and finish this I am going to find you and kill You SO GET TO WORK

XenoxX

Feral-Fox responds:

Are you thretening me? :P Just kidding. To be honest, I dont know if I will, becouse my crappy mixing and i feel the track is just busted :( If I decided to do somthing with it, it will probably come in a new form lol. I have learned / done stuff differently now.

Well later, and thanks for the review!

[[Kriz] - Sparkling]

awesome work

Good song it made me happy

BAD

1: the bass at :54 kinda gets annoying
2: I think you made the song to long the melody Was maybe To far stretched out

GOOD

1: The melody itself was Really good (It made me happy and I am a cranky teenage girl)
2 The bass was well done except for where pointed it out at...
3: The build up was well put together good job on that

5/5 ( Cause I am Nice)
9/10 ( Cause of the bad things I pointed Out)

Well Thats it Have a good Day...

XenoxX

Kr1z responds:

its pretty variated though, anyway thx for the review x-D

[::Z::Overworld Map Remix]

Aweosme work

BAD

1: I think the drums get kinda repetitive after Awhile mabye you should work on the

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GOOD
1: The melody's where played out pretty much perfect...

2: The selection of instruments where well picked out

3: It seems like you put alot of effort into this song Which made it as good as it is...

Well thats all Have A Good Day

XenoxX (Best girl alive JK)

Zajed responds:

ye i had no idea what to do with the drums so i just made them simple

melodys took me with the classical version a long time to finish them, it was a bit easier with this version

i checked the sounds a few times before i used them and i like the sounds i used lol

thanks alot for the review i appreciate it

naww my girlfriend is the best girl alive lol jk :P

[Happy Piano]

I Suggest

I Suggest making a full song out of this just add some variations to it...

XenoxX

Grub-Xer0 responds:

I'll do it when I find the inspiration

[(::Goodbye::)]

goow work

Ok

1: You need to add more to the melody and more instruments to it for an example a piano or a Choir.

2: The Chords are well played out Its a good song its just needs more to it.

Good work

XenoxX

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

IU kept on trying to add a piano, it just never worked out. But this song is really a dedication more than anything. Thanks for your review *_^

[DJ Sanryd - Teddy Bear Rave]

Aweosme Intro

1: The Kick needs some serious Work

2: This song needs some bass and some background music add some strings or something

3: Add some sort of clap at So Kick...Kick&Clap...Kick...Kick&Clap The dots representing nothing

4: This is trance Not techno. Trance always has the Kick every Four Steps

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1: The main melody Is awesome As Always

2: The VOX Make this song so much better

3: The intro Is full of AWESOMENESS LOL

Good work

XenoxX

Sanryd responds:

hey, just thanking u from a long time ago for the hints and tips u gave me thanks!

[DJ Sanryd - As we Dance]

Here I go again

1: i don't think the instruments really fit the melody Take the time to try lots of different ones for every song

2: The siren effect at 2:23 Doesn't really fit in to the song

3: the kick needs some effects to it it sounds kinda Plain

4: its very repetitive add some variations

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1: The Main melody Is very Well done

2: The vox are good the bring every song to a new level

Good work

XenoxX

Sanryd responds:

thanks.... u were a big help!

[DJ Sanryd - Finally]

Wow

This is a lot better then the last song of yours I reviewed

I have 2 things to say

1: the noise at :52 should just be taking out no offense but yeah

2: This song has a LOAD of potential Just the drums need some serious work get a new kick and a new bass

ok 3 things: The song needs more variation its pretty much the same threw out the whole song

OK 4: At 1:26 when you lower the volume I think that should just not happen its not very effective...

Well thats it for the bad Now for the good

1: The main melody is probably one of the best I have EVER heard

2: The intro was really Well done as well

Good work Send me a Pm if you decide to redo it and when its done.

XenoxX

Sanryd responds:

wow, thanks for the extensive review. The points you brought up are great, i think i will try to redo this. Like i've told other people i did this in 2 hours. I really appreciate what you said. So give me a week or so to fine tune it now. I think i'll go check to see if you have some stuff i'd like, you seem to know how to make a good song from your comments. Being new to this, hearing reviews helps... i wish i could have someone telling me these things while i'm writing songs.

[[Dj-U] Happiness Remix]

Nice Job

Awesome melody you might have made this a little to repetitive but its still good

BTW this is techno not trance....Just letting you no for later submissions trance have to have the kick every beat your bass is trancy but not the kick

If you use FL studio it would bet every four steps put a kick

X e n o x X

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Thanks for the review. I was unsure weather to put it into trance or techno because
1. The sort of varies while techno usually has the same beat over and over.
and 2. It very light and airy and i've never heard light airy techno

But your probably right about a kick. I Probably should placed it in Miscellaneous